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Untitled
Contributed by
bj111
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:33:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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the empty page
is white noise
and tempting
a siren s song
on a barren shore
and treacherous
the words placed there
have metal jackets
and no conscience
but they re also soft
as cat s fur
and shed
they re never certain
of beginning
and end
they write
themselves
and move on
their passing
an impression
on the sand
possibly recalled
recited
and another day heard
Copyright ©
bj111
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2004-07-01 18:33:51]
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:55:22 PM AEST
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| i liked this piece.. it was nicely written.. by the way i didnt know how to comment on your comment.. so i just commented underneath urs on vermillions poem words of a serail killer so go read it :) and really listen to what it has to say.. reply back if you feel the need.. AMI JO |
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