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I lost the game
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suicide
My one last chance
The knife is here
Its my last dance
Blade so clear
Wrist exposed
Carving begins
Rows after rows
Blood to the surface
Emotions have left
Air slowly leaving
My lungs in my chest
The knife to my throat
I slide it across
The game of life is over
I've finally lost
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-07-01 19:28:31]
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Re: I lost the game
(User Rating: 1 )
by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:35:13 PM AEST
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I like how you explained everything and explained what happened.
Good Job!
Anita |
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Re: I lost the game
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:37:23 PM AEST
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| That was short and sweet, and brutally honest. Great job |
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