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I Miss You
Contributed by
Bones
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The hours that have went by have seemed like days
And the days have seemed like years
That pass by me as I think of you
Wondering how you are
Wondering what you're doing now
And wondering when we'll talk again
But I wont let this build up inside of me
I've been torn up inside too many times
And I still can't believe this happening
I miss you
And I can't stop thinking of you
On the days I don't hear from you there's a emptyness within me
A place that becomes numb when I don't know how you are
And it's tearing me up inside
I just want to say that I'm worried about you
And that I can't sleep because this is devouring me
I miss you
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Bones
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2004-07-01 20:05:29]
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Re: I Miss You
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:06:54 PM AEST
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very sad poem....yet very well written and very sweet....I hope that eventually you can sleep....Keep writing..
Love,
Jamie |
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Re: I Miss You
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by brew on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:19:47 PM AEST
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| LOVE..again...........its simple, yet comples.but feel it and it will come how it should.Beautiful , writing! |
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Re: I Miss You
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:25:53 AM AEST
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I am sorry for your pain ....*hugs you*
hope that in time you will be able to sleep again, this is a very touching and moving poem,
pixie xx |
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