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No safety
Contributed by
neglected1
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:12:59 PM in AEST
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Far from the safety
Slipping towards the obscurity
Nothing but wasted images
Memories that determine to haunt me
Standing with eyes closed shut
Separation within..minimum pain
Hasty movements gone to vanish me
Injudicious thoughts come closer
Singing dreams inside my head
Listening to this voice in the back of my head
Dusk till dawn
Something keeps on talking to me consciously
Finding myself in places with names but no faces
Taking the fall rock hard
No help heaving me out of flames
Constant apprehension of the truth
Just a simple minded nuisance
I just wish i didn't feel like there was something i missed
I would give it all away
Just to have a covered place
And someone to go home to
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2004-07-01 20:12:59]
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Re: No safety
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:15:11 PM AEST
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This is very sad ywt very well written and many people go through this..One day you will have someone to come home to and you'll love them forever...You'll see.....JUST WAIT....Your time will come soon...
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Re: No safety
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:22:23 PM AEST
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This bought tears to my heart, and memories I wish stayed buried, Yet I have read it twice and each time, brings forth more images of heart breaking sadness,
But Like the last comment you will oneday have someone to love who will love you back and who will be there at home waiting with open arms and a heart to match.
So you take care you hear. |
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Re: No safety
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by sayoko on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:53:12 PM AEST
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| This is a very sad poem but wonderful to read. It's an awful feeling to feel unwanted. Hope you find whatever makes you happy. |
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Re: No safety
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by Mortis-Dark on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:20:27 PM AEST
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This is the feeling I get alot. To know that your unwanted is a feeling with the upmost power to bring suicidal tendicies. smashing write.
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