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this is me
Contributed by
tanisha
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i have tattoos on my body
i am scarred with piercings too
i dress however i feel the same
i dont apologize, this is me
i listen to my music, as loud as the volume will go
i go to rock shows and raves,
when the musics on my attention goes
i speak my mind and i wont hold back
if i make you cry i dont care
my friends all know my temper
if you hit me, i will hit you back
i am not afraid of dying
ive been to jail once and i will return
the future doesnt bother me
i just go one day at a time
i dont live my life by your rules
id rather live by mine
iam not going to be your puppet
or worship the ground that you walk on
i dont care for many people
my dogs my real best friend
this world i know bores me
so i seek adventure from within
id rather be out at night
driving around the town
than be up during the day
working like the rest of you clowns
i dont live my life for my job
and i know ill always be late
but thats okay because they know me
and my work always turns out great
you can say that iam too stubburn
to set in my ways to compromise
id say that i dont care
because this is me, and its my life...
Copyright ©
tanisha
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2004-07-01 22:34:28]
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Re: this is me
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by angelrae on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:52:54 PM AEST
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| it is definately a well written poem. It is weird that I also wrote a poem of who I am. We do need to accept ourselves as who we are, changing for ourselves, to love, to be compassionate, to be sensitive to others who are who they are. We all need to grow in who we are. |
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Re: this is me
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:20:20 PM AEST
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| You know this was a good write. True poetry writing doesn't have to rhyme. It's all about being true to urself and those who read it. Let them into ur life, and this definately worked. Great poem. Love::::Kirby |
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