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Perfect
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:38:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wait for me here
in the place where we danced
each foot gracefully placed
step by step and through our souls
hold my hand forever
and seal our memory in you
deeply hidden in your mind's favorite place
what was that word that we use to say?
"perfect," right?
visionary couple who felt it
realness and purity of knowledge
face to face with presence
facing down all obstacles
together we were right
we will always know
for it's all that matters
-it's our legacy and identity
Copyright ©
outdoorsman
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2004-07-02 00:38:50]
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Re: Perfect
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:53:30 AM AEST
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| beautiful! |
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Re: Perfect
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by jan on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:27:27 AM AEST
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| You did an excellent job expressing your emotions. And isn't that is the most important part of poetry! Good Job! |
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Re: Perfect
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:46:58 PM AEST
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| I am speechless after reading this. This was a great poem. Wonderful words. Love::::Kirby |
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