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Dad's Love
Contributed by
MissMandy
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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"You're fat, you're ugly
you can do better
you're so irresponsible
you're not my daughter.
"We're not your slaves
we don't have the time
you don't do anything
want some cheese with that whine?"
All from a man
who weighs 300 pounds
who tells us what to do
while he sits around.
"Mow the lawn, clean your room
stack the wood, make me tea
empty the trashes, vacuum the floor
oh you snot, don't make me.
"Hurry up, chop chop
come on now, run!
Without doing work
you'll have no fun."
Come on, old man
let's see you run!
I'm 15 years old
and my workload's a ton!
"You have no stress"
Bull*****, I think.
Shut up, old man
go drown in the sink.
Copyright ©
MissMandy
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2004-07-02 02:28:27]
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Re: Dad's Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:49:26 AM AEST
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Hi Mandy,
Now this what I call super venting but it shows wisdom as u could see it from your dad's angle too.
This is awesome!
I'm sure this will make anyone smile and many will
learn from this is they see from your write that things can get better.
I have three grown children and when they went thru puberty etc. I suffered along with them but we all made it thanks 2 God.
luv it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Dad's Love
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:49:43 PM AEST
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Let it out, it feels better that way. Poetry's a very good outlet. Good thing it chose you.
Take care, be strong.
David |
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