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Lost without you
Contributed by
evil1
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There's no reason for my life to go on...
Now that you've left...and your forever gone...
I don't know what I'm going to do...
My life has no meaning if I can't spend it with you...
This pain that's causing my broken heart...
Is only because we are apart....
I want it to go away cause it hurts so much...
It's here cause I need to see you and feel your touch...
I feel like I'm dead...and all alone...
The world mean nothing and doesn't matter if your gone...
I can't explain the pain I'm going through...
But I know I deserve it cause I cheated on you...
I don't deserve what you have inside....
You've always been there for me and you never lied....
A girl that's so perfect with a soft kind heart like you....
doesn't deserve do be cheated on or lied to....
So I'm truly sorry for breaking your heart and causing you pain....
I'm sorry for causing your tears to fall down your cheeks like rain...
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evil1
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2004-07-02 04:13:02]
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Re: Lost without you
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by venkat on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:20:34 AM AEST
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| well expressed....soo heart felt feelings.. venkat |
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Re: Lost without you
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:46:50 AM AEST
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True luv will endure the fire.
peace, faith, luv,
emy |
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Re: Lost without you
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by coldestflame on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:06:38 AM AEST
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| hey... nice pome.. nice read.. hope she came back.. or that your at peace with yourself now.. g |
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Re: Lost without you
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:46:14 AM AEST
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awww this is very sad, I am sorry for your pain,*hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Lost without you
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 09:47:42 AM AEST
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It's a good poem. I don't excuse "cheating" at all, but at least you are apologetic for doing so.
Kimberly |
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Re: Lost without you
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:35:32 AM AEST
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| Beautiful self searching. I'm sorry about ya'll pain, but ya'll are growing. I hope it works out and true love comes thru. Best wishes to you. God bless. And one last thing great poem. |
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