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Cut your hair and Ill give you a job
Contributed by
ArdRi79
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:44:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Nothing can I afford?
for, I am broke and unemployed
cannot buy a drink,
So socialising I avoid,
Blacker are depressions depths
darker are the nights alone,
then the clothes I wear
or the guy in the que behind me's skin tone
What do I have to do to get a job?
Who do i have to beg?
Will I have to lie and rob
to keep a roof over my head?
I look to tomorrow,
Another day I dread,
and from my family I borrow
The shame, I wish i could just stay in bed
But I drag my carcass out again,
looked straight in my eyes, employment denied,
I wont go to jail, for the hair on my head
Do your worst im Metal 'till im dead.
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2004-07-02 12:44:27]
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Re: Cut your hair and Ill give you a job
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:50:06 PM AEST
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ello x
it shows the picture life of the unemployed and well its not very good
you showed it good:Dwell done
funny though it was i dont know if it was ment to be?
luv han x |
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Re: Cut your hair and Ill give you a job
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:04:27 PM AEST
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| I feel this.... I'm currently unemployed as well...it really sucks. Good writing... |
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Re: Cut your hair and Ill give you a job
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:14:57 PM AEST
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"Do your worst im Metal 'till im dead."...god bless you. that was a excellent line and a great poem.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Cut your hair and Ill give you a job
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by arden on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:37:32 AM AEST
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sad, yet powerful poem.
hope things get better for you soon, iv been there as well. loved the poem. keep it up.
Arden |
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