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Beginnings.
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:37:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A young mans anguished cry, echoes back down the years to the sacred safety of a mothers womb, to the inborn knowledge of a mothers love. An old mans fading thoughts, rekindle in a lonely spark to a time when dreams were fresh, and hearts and souls were young. A mothers quiet certainty, stirs within her pregnant being the dreams she has for an unborn son, will guide him straight and strong to be the man she knows he will become. The ancient sage sits and ponders, but cant think where the answer is to a question where you just cant win, where do beginnings end and where do ends begin?
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Re: Beginnings.
(User Rating: 1 ) by bj111 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:36:17 PM AEST (User
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Don't know why but this gave me pause. Thank you for the poem. Beginnings and endings sometimes seem less distinct with the improtant things. Everything seems so connected.
Once again thank you....bob |
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Re: Beginnings.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Monkeybones99 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:53:58 PM AEST (User
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I would like to say very good write keep up the good work. |
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Re: Beginnings.
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:50:28 PM AEST (User
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excellent write... I wonder if most mothers ponder on things such as this when they are pregnant.. |
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