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becoming One
Contributed by
peace123
on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beloved
make us one..
this ache is a blessing
and sweet are the tears
that flow from absence...
how lovely union will be
finish this work...
so we can be One
come come to me...take away this ache..
i am half dead now...a slow death...
be merciful...come..give me breath
breathe life into me
Oh my love, how much longer
till we are one...
help me to see only you
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2002-10-22 23:00:00]
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Re: becoming One
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 03:15:15 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this and the love I felt reading it! Good one! Christina |
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Re: becoming One
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by aernby on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 03:41:40 AM AEST
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| this is a good write -- I like it |
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Re: becoming One
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 03:44:49 PM AEST
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| I enjoy reading this poem very good. |
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