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Power
Contributed by
SkippysAm0r0n123
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 08:07:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Was it worth it?
Did you know it?
I dint see it,
Maybe I should have,
But now your gone,
Did you not know?
Did no one tell you,
There's power in the powder,
It takes the one's you love,
The one's you never wanna give up,
It break's you in two,
IT take's you soul,
Make's you do thing's you would not do,
And the powder took you!!
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2004-07-02 20:07:31]
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Re: Power
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:36:56 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry for ur loss. This was a great poem and very well written. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Power
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by KiLin on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:49:48 PM AEST
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| Thats a deep poem. Great job! |
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Re: Power
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:28:24 PM AEST
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| excellent write with much emotion shown. |
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