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Redefining
Contributed by
neglected1
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:14:25 PM in AEST
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At first i see an open wound
Tainted and ruinous
It breathes chaotic catastrophe
It cries to be renewed
So sick of limiting myself to fit your definition
You keep your riches and ill sew my stitches
You cant make me think like you, mundane
Tears are the color of anger
They arid to form a scab
Taut and lax to the touch
Underneath, the new skin breaths
As outwardly cliche' as it may seem
Dead skin will atrophy itself to start again
Look closely at the open wound
No room to fit in your perfect status
I come with the guillotine
Cut throat
From the moment i slid in the door
You know i'm back because you can hear it in the floor
I got to keep on moving
I got to find a honest lover
I'm moving on, moving on
Try to find someone that will be there for me
Take away this tampered soul
Undertake the old stitches
Redefine a meaning for me
Lessen the intense emotions behind these crucial conflictions
I'm ready to take it off now
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2004-07-02 22:14:25]
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Re: Redefining
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by waos on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:54:59 PM AEST
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| ouch. that must hurt inside something awful. i really like how you wrote this though. the second stanza/paragraph was my favorite. "tears are the color of anger...dead skin will atrophy itself to start again" those are my favorite. |
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Re: Redefining
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:36:25 AM AEST
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I cant imagine what you are goi9ng through right now, but my advice to you is tell him that you are worth more than to be treated like this, as how can you be with someone if you cant trust them? you have written it from the heart and very well,
pixie xx |
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Re: Redefining
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:34:43 PM AEST
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| forgive but never forget. it might happen again. |
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