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Beginning of the End
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hearts are breaking
Hear the sound
Bones are shattering
Hit the ground
Lies are whispering
Puncture the skin
As we give in to the darkness
And wretchedness wins
Demons are clawing
Their way into minds
We just sit back and watch
Cause weve missed all the signs
That our world is crumbling
Into pieces of hate
And our people are dieing
But now its too late
Cause weve lost all our morals
And religion is stale
As our hearts fill with emptiness
And foolishness prevails
Were lost in ourselves
With nothing to lose
But our hopes and our dreams
And reality too
Were fading to black
Because this is the end
And theres no looking back
But we forgot to begin
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Re: Beginning of the End
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by Jacquelynne on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:01:22 PM AEST
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wow... this sounds like something i'd write. it's really good, i look forward to reading more of your work.
hugs'n'kisses
jenni
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jac |
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Re: Beginning of the End
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by venkat on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:11:57 AM AEST
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| Good expression.. nice poem...venkat |
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Re: Beginning of the End
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:31:24 AM AEST
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great expression , wonderful poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Beginning of the End
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:16:32 PM AEST
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| such a powerful and great write. Yes we are fading to black. I hate how the world is going right now. Such a wonderful poem. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Beginning of the End
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by Archie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:22:48 PM AEST
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| You are right about this as far as religion goes God always keeps a remnant around for those who are looking. |
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