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own little world
Contributed by
spooky
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:13:56 AM in AEST
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someone said,
that a person must look within them selfs,
to find themself,,
sometimes that person isn't ready for reality,
they stay in a world where,
people, places and things are diffrent,,
some are afraid to touch the things that they love,
afraid it would dissappear,,
go away,,leave them,,or even abuse them,,
some find shelter in Illusions of themselfs,,
wanting to be something,,and then they are,,
some,,just don't know how to except it,,
afraid of rejection,,lose or even put down for the things that they do,,
wanting to be wanted is the thing that they want most,,
but can't have ,,because of something that has happened,,afraid to relieve the past,,
hurt,,pain,,rejection,,abuse,,
they run to a world where things are perfect to them,,,don't disallusion them,,except them,,
it's not hurting you,,or anyone else,,
if anything it made them stronger,,
to walk out into the world with a positive state of mind,,they except the changes,,but you don't know it,,
how many people do you know that is normal to you,,,,,,,,,are they,,,,or is it that they are in there own little world,,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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Re: own little world
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:50:25 AM AEST
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this touched me.
i understand the thoughts of the poeple in this because in the past i've suffered it too, and some times still do now.
i liked reading this one. it was interesting for me to look at the way you feel about it, and then go back and compare them to mine. |
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Re: own little world
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 07:45:53 AM AEST
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true healing comes from the very inner self...reality is harsh yes ....but for those who have the strength it is a liberating experience...to those who care to live in the shelter of their own world we must love them and accept them for who they are and hope that someday they will be free to see the wonderful person they really are...in no way should we judge someone else for their differences but encourage them to be the best they are able
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Re: own little world
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:19:05 PM AEST
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great message craig, as always, every poem you write always has a lesson for all in the kindest most heartfelt way, it is a joy to read you:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: own little world
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:36:44 PM AEST
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| A ver true and wise poem. Great write. |
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