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Brian
Contributed by
Brians_sweety
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:05:31 PM in AEST
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Brian is a name I think of all day
I know I never have to worry about him going astray
I know he loves me so my days aren t gray.
I told him I loved him on Thursday,
and his loving response was ok
then he told me the next night he felt the sameway
He makes me feel as if I m going to fly away
his love gives me wings so I can float away
He tells me he will never run away
so I know I will never have to look the other way
I said all of this to let you know to stay away!
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Brians_sweety
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2004-07-03 16:05:31]
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Re: Brian
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:09:59 PM AEST
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aw thats really sweet
gr8 poem!
keep those feeling
because is you write them down
they'll last forever in heart and in eachother
thanks
x luv han |
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Re: Brian
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by Sonibe on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 02:14:26 PM AEST
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....lol, I can catch a hint, lol....bravo, bravo on a well written poem....I hope you and Brian get married someday....but make sure you INVITE ME....bravo, bravo
Ai,
Sonibè |
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Re: Brian
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:35:11 PM AEST
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| very good. the only thing i didnt like about this was the fact that you wanted to rhyme everything with the same words in the last part of it. |
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