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First Love
Contributed by
UncleSpunky
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:41:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Fervent feeling Ungodly desire Calm my nerves Kiss me
Yearnings grow Over my emotion Under Milkwood?
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UncleSpunky
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2004-07-03 16:41:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: First Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:59:02 PM AEST (User
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I love the first stanza... great job... that could stand on it's own. |
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