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My Dream
Contributed by
veruca
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:07:21 PM in AEST
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In a dream of awakening
our minds come together
stuck on a window sill of dark water
where all life floats away
burried in sadness as deep as the core
finding no trace of an escape
so deeper I go into my dream
leaving the window sill to fall
falling down onto the dark earth
crimson red it glows
I hit the growned like a huge tear-drop
crashing down to break........
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Re: My Dream
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:39:11 PM AEST
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| wow....so short but so big all at the same time.. i loved this write! |
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Re: My Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
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| i agree with p.s. for some reason this reminded me of evanescence. |
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