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If You I Will
Contributed by
MisterRight
on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you walk, I will follow
If you leave, I will be hollow
If you run, I will be right behind
If you lose the way, I will try to remind
If you take the wrong path, I will walk it too
If you stumble, I will support you
If you become lost, I will guide you home
If you need help, my hand I will loan
If you fall, I will catch you
If you want commitment, I will be true
If you need advice, I will do my best
If you cant decide, I will suggest
If youre sad, I will make you smile
If you need me there, I will travel a thousand miles
If you get cold, I will keep you warm
If you want sex, I will perform
If you become sick, I will be your nurse
If you become embarrassed, I will do something worse
If youre lonely, I will be there
If you need comfort, I will play with your hair
If youre in pain, your pain I will sooth
If you dont believe, my love I will prove
If you make a mistake, I will help you through
If you become tired, I will carry you
If youre afraid, you I will protect
If you need attention, you I will never neglect
If you need space, I will give it to you
If you make a wish, I will try to make it come true
If you dream, I will try to make it real
If youre hungry, I will cook a nice meal
If you have goals, your goals I will help you attain
If you want time, here I will remain
If youre upset, I will be just as blue
If youre angry, I will calm you
If youre angry at me, I will love you still
If you have a desire, I will strive to fulfill
If you have doubts, those I will erase
If you need a hug, I will give my loving embrace
If you have questions, the answer I will find
If your beauty should fade, I will be blind
If you happen to cry, I will cry too
If you want to go places, I will take you
If you want spontaneity, I will take you right now
If you want marriage, I will take the vow
If you want children, I will be their father
If you want forever, once again I will offer
If you want romance, I will supply it at times
If you need love, I will always give mine
If you have ideas, I will lend my ear
If your body aches, I will message you my dear
If you want something, I will give it to you
If you want something of mine, Ill split it in two
If youre bored, I will entertain
If you say Im crazy, I will admit for you I'm insane
If you want a fairytale, I will be your knight
If you say Im wrong, I will admit when youre right
If you want to be a queen, I will be your king
If you have a rough day, I will tuck you in
If you frown, I will make that frown fade
If you want me to clean, well, I will hire a maid
If you love me, I will be the happiest man alive
If you give us a chance, your wishes, I will never deprive
If your not satisfied, I will give more
Whatever you need, is what I will always be here for
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MisterRight
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2002-10-23 09:30:00]
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Re: If You I Will
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 09:55:30 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh, this is beautiful and so sweet! It's everything anyone could ever ask for!
lol don't mind me I'm a little hyper :D
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: If You I Will
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by nonamegirl on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:03:17 PM AEST
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| I can't believe you came up with sooo many If you / i will pairs!!! It's a great poem. |
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Re: If You I Will
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:21:34 PM AEST
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Well done another great write,from Mr.Right!
You never sees to amaze me! This girl has to be crazy to let you slip away! You need to check out my poem,Breaking up leads to sorrow! It's a true story about a friend of mine!
Bravo!!! Christina |
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Re: If You I Will
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:18:01 PM AEST
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Whatever you need, is what I will always be here for....
Wow... I love that line!!! another awesome write... and again, all you have to do is what and see, and keep all those promises! You actually told her you would hire a maid???? Can you clone yourself and have your clone fall for me??? I could use someone like you in my life ;)
I hope that you are seeing a solution... I saw that comment on one of my poems about not wanting to talk about plans... I hope that can change... plans are a good thing... however, I know that in this case, that doesn't seem to be working...
Hope you are feeling a little less blue!!! This was another great write from you!
Ginnie |
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Re: If You I Will
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful.. what else could a girl ask for?... Good Luck Curtis! |
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Re: If You I Will
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by TigerBird81 on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 03:54:33 AM AEST
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This poem is beautiful!!!!
Keep up the good work so i can continue to read and weep!!!!
Your poet friend Tiger Bird x x |
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Re: If You I Will
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by TigerBird81 on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 03:54:58 AM AEST
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This poem is beautiful!!!!
Keep up the good work so i can continue to read and weep!!!!
Your poet friend Tiger Bird x x |
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Re: If You I Will
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by princesspurty on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:06:12 AM AEST
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| so beautiful, wish i was the one this was for, she's very lucky |
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Re: If You I Will
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by BluGurl6 on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 04:25:42 AM AEST
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| this is SO sweet.....that's one lucky girl!! |
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