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Broken Circle
Contributed by
hopelesscase
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:14:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Friendships torn and lives are broken
Nothing's safe in this war
So secure all the friends you value most
You'll lose everything if you dont
All the pain and tears and lies
Everyone has their own secrets
But eventually they're found out and exposed
And then it's World War 3
So if you want to keep your secrets
Dont get caught up in this circle of friends
Because this circle's been broken
And no amount of tape or glue
No amount of hugs or kisses
Can fix this broken circle of friends
That I happen to be stuck in
Copyright ©
hopelesscase
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2004-07-03 23:14:25]
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Re: Broken Circle
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:59:12 AM AEST
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youve got this right to the tee just had this go on with me tonight one day Ill learn my lesson as Im 35 years old. I hope things work out well in your case its a tuff situation and world war 3 it was for me as well.Great write and good luck to you
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Re: Broken Circle
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:45:34 PM AEST
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I like your poem very much. I know how that feels. I hope that you are feeling stronger soon. Best of luck
Katie |
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