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Twist 'o the Knife
Contributed by
thumper
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 06:42:50 AM in AEST
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I've shed too many tears
For too many years
I've hardened my heart, for sure
I'm helpless to say
I've gotten that way
But there just isn't any sure cure
It's that twist 'o the knife
That's hardened my life
They just gotta keep twistin' away
It's not enough that I'm broken
They just gotta keep hoping
That I'll fade more and more everyday
I refuse to give in
I won't let them win
They won't get their way with me
I just keep plodding away
Because, some day
Hopefully, they'll just let me be!
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thumper
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 07:00:33 AM AEST
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great poem, very dark, I once harredend my heart, I couldnt feel any pain, but I also didnt feel love either...
takecare
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 07:36:40 AM AEST
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Great rhythm!
After these last two,I will be on the lookout for more of your words :)
LW |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 07:55:17 AM AEST
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i relate to this poem so much that it does scare me alittle. over the years my heart has become harder and harder now i feel as if i dont have any real love.
great write. i enjoyed this in its darkness.
hugs
gen xx |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by thumper on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:01:28 AM AEST
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Yeah, Jenna, It's a quandry!! If you close your heart, you lose, if you open you're heart you lose! Sometimes, I wish, I didnt't have to, But it's always there.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:19:34 AM AEST
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did you intentionaly make this rap-compatible? nice to read
PFR |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by thumper on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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No I didn't. Must have been the Detriot connection. Didn't mean for it to be that way. But thanx. I take it as a compliment. :O)
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by venkat on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:43:25 AM AEST
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| very resolute..very strong..beautiful dark poem.. venkat |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 11:24:58 PM AEST
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I like this poem. It was very well worded, I've felt this way many times. Great job.
Katie |
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Re: Twist 'o the Knife
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:03:12 AM AEST
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This poem really grabs your heart... What misery it must be that you're even prepared to let love go unnoticed, because of the pain you feel...
Hugs and strength!
Hur |
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