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Take A Look
Contributed by
bluoreo
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:14:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take a look at my mind
My thoughts will make you laugh
Cry
Fear
Worry
They will finally make you understand
Understand how I am
Who I am
How I feel
Why I feel
You'll finally know me
Take a look at my heart
You'll find a large gaping hole
A hole only you can fill
It pains
It aches
It breaks and falls apart
It needs
It wants
It heals and loves
All it wants is someone who cares
Take a look at my life
You'll see what I go through everyday
How hard I try, knowing things wont work
How hard I fall, only to fall harder tomorrow
How much it hurts to be alone
How every single effort is wasted
I'm lost in lost causes, never to be found again
Take a good look
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2004-07-04 08:14:56]
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Re: Take A Look
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:21:02 AM AEST
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very deep write, very sad,thanks for sharing this with us all..........
pixie xx |
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Re: Take A Look
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:38:14 AM AEST
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This is so raw and heartwrenching.... It really, really touched me. I love writes like this --- the kind that just seem to have bled out. Thanks so much for sharing it... I do hope that you feel better soon. *hug*
Looking.... with admiration,
SNM |
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