|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Do You Know What Pain You Brought?
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:33:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Why didnt you let me go?
Do you know how I feel now?
Why couldnt you just reject me?
And saved me some questions, some frowns.
Its such a mucked up feeling,
Being back, with in these walls.
I just stare up at this white ceiling.
And now I gotta stand, not fall.
Theres no way Im healing.
Blood surrounds me in a pool.
I close my eyes,
And see others dead.
Is it a trick of the eye?
Or a trick of the head?
I just know that what Im feeling.
Is Im gonna finish this and then spill red.
You were only doing your job,
But I really wish I was DEAD!
The pain is surrounding me, and laughing hard.
Im so scarred. So alone in the dark.
Theres only so much, I can find meaning for.
The rest is blurred, its painful, its sore!
Yet now I have to face it,
But I cant handle these thoughts.
I HATE you for stopping me,
I LIKE your arms for keeping me court.
I HATE the fact you're gone,
Out and away from my life.
I HATED being in that cell.
That hell,
With my cravings for a knife!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-07-04 11:33:53]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Do You Know What Pain You Brought?
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:37:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very sad and emotional....
great write,
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Do You Know What Pain You Brought?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:14:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very vividly written, very good job. BUt that pain is felt so strong. If this is nightmare, then this could mean, you have to say good bye to some of your habits.
Wish you wished to live:-) with love, aika:-) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
