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Dreamscene.
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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New frosted stardust,
in a black velvet night
moonbeams peeping,
through deepest midnight.
Cloud gods are waging,
their heavenly war
through mountains and valleys,
of skymist they roar.
Moon on the water,
and moon in the skies
perfect companions,
for the stars in my eyes.
In dark satin dreams,
we wandered the night
declaring our love,
at dawns early light.
We put night to sleep,
and welcomed the day
but the magic of midnight's
inside me to stay.
Copyright ©
backstreetdreamer
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2004-07-04 11:49:15]
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Re: Dreamscene.
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:44:14 PM AEST
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this is just beautiful
pixie xx |
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Re: Dreamscene.
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 05:30:45 PM AEST
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I am so in awe of this poem that I am at a loss of the right words to type in regards to feedback.
This is the first poem I have read of yours and WOW you are not only talented but really great at writing poetry.
I look forward to reading all your submissions. Excellent all the way!
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