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Fireworks
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 06:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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My love and I walk hand in hand.
We set our chairs on lakeshores sand.
The darkened sky sends wintry wind.
The summers thickness has been thinned.
With friends around and famly too.
Its odd cause all I see is you.
The sky goes black, the crowds abuzz
My brow contracts, brains full of fuzz
He asks, Whats wrong? And hugs me close
I laugh and say A double dose
Now his brow furrows, hes confused.
His thoughts aflow, his looks bemused.
I laugh again and smile real wide
He wonders if Ive gone tongue tied
I tell him what I know is true
That doubled are the sparks well view
He asks if I have gone insane
And I articulate my brain
The fireworks are lovely, yes
But with them I am not impressd
Theyre much less pretty in the skies
Than when were kissing with closed eyes
Thats when those sparks are really sweet
That sensation just cant be beat
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2004-07-04 18:25:22]
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Re: Fireworks
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 06:37:49 PM AEST
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awww! so romantic and sweet!! happy 4th:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Fireworks
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 06:50:26 PM AEST
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My Scintillating Crescendo came out of a night of seeing fireworks. But I know that the kind that God creates---both in the sky and on this earth are the best. Bravo, my friend. Bravo!
Stitch |
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Re: Fireworks
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:14:44 AM AEST
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Chels, you are so right. Those are the best kinds of fireworks, LOL.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Fireworks
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:59:15 AM AEST
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Tender and passionate at the same time... you just can't top that! I enjoyed this, Chelsea - and agree wholeheartedly... fireworks in the sky certainly pale by comparison!
Lovely, lovely write! Simply stated and yet profound.
With terrific happiness for you,
SNM |
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Re: Fireworks
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by lifefliesby on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:58:40 AM AEST
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It was great; both the poem and that night.
Excellent write and great memories, babe.
I love you, with all my heart.
Always babe... always
~Jared~ |
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Re: Fireworks
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:24:32 AM AEST
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| I ttake my hhat off to thiss one, aa beautiful wwrite. keep em ccoming hugs from bbernard. |
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Re: Fireworks
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:30:16 AM AEST
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So sweet,
They are always the best type of sparks. lol
A lovely poem Chesea bun. lol
*hugs you lots* Phil xxx |
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Re: Fireworks
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:18:37 AM AEST
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A really lovely poem, well rhymed and structurally sound. And of course sweet to taste.
Thanks for the smiles. |
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