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The night that released everything
Contributed by
kittiekat
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:28:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The heart is pinned with needles and grows sore as a bruise.
The eyes shed tears that seeps through the pillowcase dragging it down the weight that is fulfilled.
The body is scorned with pain. Flashed with memories that are reborn.
Years of fighting the deathful stabs that are scarred for eternity.
The mind corrupted with lies. It is tainted for all that it contains that is useful, therefore gets destroyed. Replaced with the dark secrets hidden upon the locked door.
The soul daggers across the sea looking for a new life to start over. As the other souls try to push aside, the life is now gone.
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kittiekat
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2004-07-04 23:28:55]
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Re: The night that released everything
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by dreaded_Axe_of_gore on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:39:02 PM AEST
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| A great way to express your pain, I think its good, A little confusing but I think its great. |
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Re: The night that released everything
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:40:20 PM AEST
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| dark and moody. full of angst, I loved every second of it. |
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Re: The night that released everything
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:38:05 AM AEST
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| Very nice write.keep writing. |
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