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It’s good to join in. Or is it?
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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I feel good inside,
Because I go round with you.
But Im not laughing inside,
Im just feeling blue.
You muck about,
And I join in.
Theres no release let out,
To keep a secret of your sins.
But I join in.
Then more and more,
I become your friends.
Pulled down more,
It never ends.
But its good to fit in
Atmospheres change,
The world twists.
But this bad friendship,
Still exists.
And I lie for you,
So you dont take blame.
Coz I know if that happens,
Youll call me names.
Act like its my fault,
Because you NEVER change!
But I know I need to fit in.
So I lie for you,
To cover your sins.
So Im with you,
And you pick on this girl.
I dont want you to.
You say I dont rule your world.
You pick on her.
And she fights back.
Good for her,
You deserved a smack.
Wait! Did I say that?
No, it wasnt me.
Honestly!
Time skips by,
I keep my gob shut.
I dont want a fight.
Get more scars, more cuts.
I keep my gob shut.
But inside, it all hurts too much!
But still I join in
I cover your sins.
And so Im accused,
Of being like you.
And so the begins
For other reasons I get picked on,
When Im not with you,
Nothing gets done,
Coz they think Im one of you.
Only, Im not.
I just dont wanna be alone.
Im not a bully!
I didnt want you to do it.
But you still went ahead.
Then you picked on me,
For saying it.
You made me feel like *****!
And we both know theres nothing I can do about it
Thats why you started,
Wasnt it?
And so all of this!
What does it mean?
Youre twisted. Or maybe its me?
I dont know.
I just know I NEVER see.
Until my life,
Comes crashing down on me!
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2004-07-05 15:04:34]
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Re: It’s good to join in. Or is it?
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:28:49 PM AEST
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aw thats really gd!
thanks for your comment i will pm you tomorrow
thanks xx
luv han x |
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Re: It’s good to join in. Or is it?
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:47:44 PM AEST
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Some where in that poem it flowed beautifully
the rest was good also
but a certain section was the best
it was...
So you don’t take blame.
‘Coz I know if that happens,
You’ll call me names.
Act like it’s my fault,
Because you NEVER change!
But I know I need to fit in.
So I lie for you,
To cover your sins.
So I’m with you,
And you pick on this girl.
I don’t want you to.
You say I don’t rule your world.
You pick on her.
And she fights back.
Good for her,
You deserved a smack.
Wait! Did I say that?
No, it wasn’t me.
Honestly!
… Time skips by,
I keep my gob shut.
I don’t want a fight.
Get more scars, more cuts.
I keep my gob shut.
But inside, it all hurts too much!
But still I join in…
I cover your sins.
And so I’m accused,
Of being like you.
And so the begins…
That was great, you should write a poem with that sort of flow
5/5
BS x |
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Re: It’s good to join in. Or is it?
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:08:50 PM AEST
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| very good write. |
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