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Tenuous Sonata
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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called out loud to make sure
words were all you wanted
unable to give you more
at least at the moment
settled in my habits
as much as I hate them
comfort in familiarity
the reverse of contempt
so I am a hypocrite
I apologize profusely
disturbing you late at night
you were awake anyway
tossing and turning with regret
trying to convince yourself
you'll have another chance at life
I consider giving up all together
we bolster each other's opinions
introduce laughter to darkness
each one sighs well out of sight of the other
thinking we could be great together
conversations, rampant desires glow
in cigarettes blue smoky haze until 3 AM when we retire
how easily we fit together
my fingers trace your collar bone
I can see you smiling in the dark
I whisper, "I love you"
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-07-05 15:04:43]
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Re: Tenuous Sonata
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:14:47 PM AEST
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so sweet, your pen is golden gaille, this is so peaceful and dreamy:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tenuous Sonata
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:16:07 AM AEST
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Another incredible write. I don't think you need the apostrophe on "sighs," but otherwise, just perfect. You are so talented.
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Re: Tenuous Sonata
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:48:19 AM AEST
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| Oh yeah, this says everything, awesome write Gaille ... Jan |
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