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Flight
Contributed by
merry
on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:24:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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______________________ rumbling wind beneath metalic wings rattles my teeth as well as my nerves saving all my prayers for the last minute hail mary full of grace - get me out of this place coasting on sunlit clouds graceful angels looking down poor misguided souls who think to fly sipping warm ginger ale and staring at the pages of a book half awake and half asleep unable to surrender to dreams knowing you are there at the other side smoking cigarettes and sipping bourbon captain announces we land in 5 minutes I search for a hairbrush and lipstick too late to change clothes, too late to run and hide nervous energy courses through me wired to every nuance that might be you the screech of tires on tarmac hail mary full of grace - we have landed in one piece I make my way off the plane, anxious, joyous I see you almost immediately, I watch you searching a woman in a white coat walks by you put your hands over her eyes, Guess who? what? oh **** wrong one, you look confused "Looking for me sweetheart?" I stroke your cheek and smile
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Re: Flight
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:41:10 PM AEST (User
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lol@"the screech of tires on tarmac
hail mary full of grace - we have landed in one piece" oh god gaile your too much!! an excellent vivid image filled poem as ever, this one is so cool:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Flight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:17:53 AM AEST (User
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Well, I took the flight with you. Masterful.
Stitch |
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Re: Flight
(User Rating: 1 ) by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:07:56 PM AEST (User
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Love the use of your colour here , Very good read.. |
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