|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The truth behind me, Taking my life
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:02:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
My heart goes out to everyone
who tried to stand in my way
when I had ended my life
that very day
I had wished them all the best
that day I put my life to rest
this heart of mine couldnt take anymore
my body it felt weak and sore
These crazy thoughts
they stirred around in my head
I love you
were the only words I had said
This sorry goes out to all who cared
slicing my wrist
was the way I was dared
lay your head down
go to sleep
while above you
I watch you and weep
you'll slowly move on
from the day I left
but in my heart a memory will be kept
Do you wanna know the truth?
My heart it was shattered, broken and ripped
did you know when I sliced my wrist I tripped?
This is for all you to know
I was just covering up my feelings that show
I'll tell you this and you may cry...
I didnt really want to die
I guess I regret taking my life
I wanted children, and to be a wife
It's just something maybe I lack
because I tried and couldnt
fight the razor back...
Copyright ©
Living_In_My_Dream
... [
2004-07-05 17:02:47]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cherriesbroken725 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:17:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I hope this isn't over a boy but this peom is the way I felt over a boy thanks for writing it and please don't try to kill yourself cuz i did and if u ever do think about what might happend to other peoples lifes if ur not in it anymore think of the good and bad but keep safe and keep writing and if u ever need to talk to someone u don't know talk to me e-mail me at gangstagatgerl@yahoo.com
-Taketra
|
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cherriesbroken725 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:20:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I hope this isn't over a boy but this peom is the way I felt over a boy thanks for writing it and please don't try to kill yourself cuz i did and if u ever do think about what might happend to other peoples lifes if ur not in it anymore think of the good and bad but keep safe and keep writing and if u ever need to talk to someone u don't know talk to me e-mail me at gangstagatgerl@yahoo.com
-Taketra
|
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by PunkRocker494 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:32:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is really good. I hope you don't hurt yourself. But the meaning is well said and insiteful. |
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:39:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Please Don't Tell Me This Isn't Over A Boy |
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:53:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good job...wish i would have known when this happend so i coulda have been there for you but...i didn't but better late then never i guess..Weel great job....if you ever have those feelings again talk to me before you act on them please... |
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:31:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
thanks for sharing this, it shows that you have inner strength to write about it.....dont end your life over anyone, it is really not worth it....
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: The truth behind me, Taking my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:12:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i understand how u feel i tried it plenty times before and hurt the onesd i loved on the way but u grow stronger and wiser email me becos if u feel down i,m alwasy here cos i know how u feel suicide is painleess but not to others xgripx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
