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Undercoat
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 07:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Like paint that peels from a touched up place
Brushed on with deceit,to cover,save face
So too can some words,hide the ugly within
Pretty it up,though the layers are thin
But over time it will slide,words will just fade
Like paint on a wall,slowly peeling away
So too will the charms,so too will the smiles
Not mine for my brush has been true all the while
With pride I stand tall,I can paint what I feel
Without worrying my words will fade and peel
For I need not understanding,not nearly enough
To compromise truth,with a deceitful brush
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2004-07-05 19:53:11]
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Re: Undercoat
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by shelby on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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amen to this one truthful and classy write my friend
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Re: Undercoat
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:05:06 AM AEST
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I could never figure out why people lie and deceive, when it all comes crashing in their face when the TRUTH is revealed. It's as if they are buying time. Little do they know...time has no price! This poem portrays the TRUTH of the matter!!! Excellent!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Undercoat
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:44:47 PM AEST
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Truer words have never been written!!! And I should know....been there...experienced that....
Love the last stanza.... it's also who I am...
Hugs to ya..hope all is well..
Jenni |
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