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Man That Wasn't Too Smart
Contributed by
rockyroad
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When will I find it?
I thought I found it once
But everytime I broke his heart
Man that asn't too smart
I even had more than one change
But everytime I blew it
Man that wasn't too smart
He loved me so much
But he wouldn't let me go
Even after I broke his heart
Man that wasnt' too smart
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rockyroad
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2004-07-05 20:46:30]
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Re: Man That Wasn't Too Smart
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by Kirby on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:02:13 PM AEST
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| Check your spelling the next time but other then that this was a great poem and I have felt this way before. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Man That Wasn't Too Smart
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:11:18 PM AEST
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i wouldnt worry about the spelling to much as we all make typos after all we're all human. and never perfect. great job.
Brandy |
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