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Growth
Contributed by
rhei76
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You want me to die
And be the guy
You want me to be
But that ain't me
I haven't yet seen
Your conspiracy
I've watched you keep it clean
Washing against the sins
You refuse to see
You want me to be
You want me to be
The product of your story
But I don't see
Everything you think you gave to me
Just a cract shell that broke
Fragile, insecure that toppled from the toke
Can't you just let it go
We still have time to grow
So let thing just be
Let me just be
Everything will work out just fine
Because beyound these I can see
Let it just be
Let it just be
Don't be mad
And we can see
...We can see the dawns new light
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-07-05 21:55:41]
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Re: Growth
(User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:17:46 AM AEST
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I give this a 4/5, its good but there was something missing for it to be a 5/5 in my books =)
Hope im not p.i.s.s.i.n you off, i try to be truthful
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