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Confusion
Contributed by
devils_daughter18
on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:12:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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my heart it fears...
my heart it cries...
everytime i am hurt...
a part of it dies...
i AM confused...
i'm ALWAYS wrong...
i am surprised that i...
have lived this long...
nothing to live for...
no one to hold...
this world is harsh...
this world is cold...
i'm all alone...
i have no friends...
if i keep this going...
it will all end!
the razor on the dresser...
starts to speak...
"get rid of your problems...
they make you weak...
I'LL heal your problems...
I'LL take them away...
all those that have hurt you...
will soon get their way..."
the razor lunges...
towards my skin...
my problems exit...
from within...
my mind slowly clears...
with every small cut...
no need to ask questions...
of "when, who, or what."
the blood it trickles...
down my arm...
it seems to be helping...
NOT causing MORE harm...
but one by one...
my thoughts re-appear
and from my eyes...
poured bright red tears...
i stared at the blade...
with surpriseand dismay...
"YOU LIED TO ME BASTARD....
YOU SAID THEY WOULD PAY!!!"
i live with these scars...
i am what i HATE...
this can't be the answer...
but now it's too late!
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2004-07-05 23:12:45]
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Re: Confusion
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by tifrob on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:20:45 PM AEST
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Very well writen. Very sad. I hope this poem isn't true.
J~ |
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Re: Confusion
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:20:58 PM AEST
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| You have so much anger. great words and very deeply felt. I pray for you and thank you for sharing your with us. God bless you. peace. |
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Re: Confusion
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:50:55 PM AEST
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| ahh, ellipses make me blind! excellent write. the pieces of your heart will be reborn again. |
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Re: Confusion
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:52:52 AM AEST
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| Very heart felt and sad but a very,very good right and the person before me the pieces will be reborn in time. |
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Re: Confusion
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:37:25 PM AEST
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| that makes me so mad! i hate life and the **** it brings! and i've done the exact same thing but i've recently stopped b/c of a certain someone. even though life is hard right now, i've made a promise to him i won't. and i also saw how it pained my family and i wouldn't want my favourite little cousins to see me in a coffin one day and ask when i'll wake up...i hope you've found an alternative |
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