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You say,I say
Contributed by
notbagheadx
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Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
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You say Im obsessive
I say I dont want to ****up
You say I need to be more aggressive
I say you need to be less submissive
You say that Im insane
I say that Im saner than you ever could be
You think I fake my pain
I say you never felt any
Judge not lest yee be judged
I dont perform for you to begrudge
If you dont appreciate me
Then ask no more
Im not your slave
dont beat me any more
(Repeat)
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2002-10-23 15:45:00]
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Re: You say,I say
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by Twinky on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 12:59:23 AM AEST
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| hey this is good but i think it needs more of a body, the beginning was great as was the ending, and i like how it is put together but i think you should try to make it longer, but if you do dont repeat a bunch of stuff over and over in it cuz that will make it worse! |
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