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The Rose
Contributed by
stinkykid
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:07:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The sun has fallen to the horizon
Night falls upon the land
The lonely rose in the garden
Suddenly falls to the ground, dead
The grass around it weeps
Must one more die for the sins?
Will we ever learn or try to change?
It seems that this will never end
We will continue to destroy
Until there is not a single rose left, alive
No more grass to weep when it is gone
But even after the rose has died and lost its color
Is it not alive in our hearts? Is it still not beautiful?
No, only the memory of its beauty remains
But isn't that what the beauty is all about?
No, soon even those memories will be lost
And all who valued it will care no more
Nothing will remain of
The rose. . .
Copyright ©
stinkykid
... [
2004-07-06 01:07:34]
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Re: The Rose
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by veruca on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:11:49 AM AEST
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Very morbid....I liked it a lot....LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
lov ya,
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Re: The Rose
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by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:19:16 AM AEST
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The Rose, nice metaphor. I like how you mention the grass, not many people mention grass.
~Tuesday~ |
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