|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Writing while under the influence
Contributed by
C2C
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:14:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
|
This is an attempt at a poem
but i'm really not in the mood
so i'll jabber and make things rhyme
until my brain is totally screwed
....
It's really not as easy as it appears
this takes a lot of thinking
but for those ones who like honesty
it also involves some drinking
....
Though, writing under the influence
isn't necessarily right
Poe, a genious some have said
but is marrying your cousin bright?
....
Okay, so i admit,
some of his works are fine
but what is with all the big words
all of which i have to look up to define
....
So i'm not the brightest crayon in the box,
i write only what i know
and so maybe that isn't much either
but atleast it i admit to being slow
....
I'll take my time and chew my words
crunch down and suck the flavor
i may stick to the hamburger and fries of writing
but it's something everyone can savor
....
Okay, now this poems sounds a bit defensive
and i guess that's understandable,
writing isn't an easy thing
but atleast it's exapandable
....
I can stretch the truth,
but it's not lying
It's really an easy concept,
in the writing world we call it "implying"
....
Yes, you know what i mean,
when one thing "implies" another
like when "you remind me of someone."
really means, "you look like your mother."
....
We can skate around the truth,
by using big words to feel smart
but sometimes it just isn't as fun
as several tiny words from the heart
....
Oh, yes i should of ended there,
that last verse did make a nice ending
but i'm still in the mood for endlings rhyming
so this poem is...pending.
....
May it will never end,
what a stroke of luck
i should end it on a stupid note
because i'm just that sort of schmuck
.....
So this is the conclustion to my little poem
it's going to cause some frustration
because the last line isn't going to rhyme
didn't see that coming, did you?
Copyright ©
C2C
... [
2004-07-06 01:14:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Writing while under the influence
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:04:30 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
'tis each their own, clever and creative:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: Writing while under the influence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:57:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| that was excellent. hilarious. intriguing because i didnt know where you were going next. id like to see what you write like under the influence of oj or applejuice. |
|
|
Re: Writing while under the influence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Psyche on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:27:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
No I did NOT see it coming!
That poem was so clever, C2C! Its was fun & conversational; you could have "babbled" out a dozen more stanzas and kept my complete attention. (Of course, I'm ADHD, so that's more of an accomplishment then it appears on the surface!)
Thanks for the smile!
(By the way - I hear its a sin to drink warm milk without dousing it with loads of chocolate, first!) |
|
|
Re: Writing while under the influence
(User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:09:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| hahaha...that was a great poem and i really didn't expect thje ending...the drinking you shouldn't do much but the poetry is awsome! great job. |
|
|
Re: Writing while under the influence
(User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:12:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| hahaha...that was a great poem and i really didn't expect thje ending...great job. |
|
|
Re: Writing while under the influence
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 03:47:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Full of attitude and had me smiling all the way through thats quite a glass of milk! lol |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
