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Differences Between Us
Contributed by
Gentledove
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:54:48 AM in AEST
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The difference between you and the difference between me,
is not as different as it may seem.
The color of your eyes, the texture of your hair,
is a difference that we should not compare.
I can walk, you're confined to a wheelchair,
You have nice clothes, mine are threadbare.
Your skin is dark, mine is pale,
You are a man, I am a female.
With all of the differencess between you and I,
There is a sameness that does apply.
We both laugh and also cry,
When life is hard, we need an ally.
We can love and feel deep pain,
When we are cut, we bleed the same.
All of us have one, it's how we proclaim,
I am me, I have a name.
So in the end, it's all the same,
The difference between us shouldn't mean a thing.
Copyright ©
Gentledove
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2004-07-06 02:54:48]
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:05:54 AM AEST
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so true, beautifully expressed:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:08:17 AM AEST
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| The first poem of your's that I have read, adn I must say that I am impressed. I shall contine to read more. |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:39:13 AM AEST
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| very impressive...beautifully touching...keep it up. venkat |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:04:25 AM AEST
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Strong words..also beautifully penned
LW |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:04:29 AM AEST
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Strong words..also beautifully penned
LW |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:16:26 AM AEST
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Solidy expressive write. You write a mean moral.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by RonMiller on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:41:23 AM AEST
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A well written poem, my friend..
With a great message..Love your work..
Ron |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:04:44 PM AEST
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The only differences that matter should be differences in the heart and soul. Those components need to closely match for a solid relationship. All the other things are just whitewashed facade. Good luck. Your work is great.
Smiles,
rita |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 12:13:50 AM AEST
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You have found yourself a fan here... I love how you write...I love the message in this....
Keep them coming...
Jenni |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:12:17 PM AEST
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| Boy if this isn't the truth...fat, thin, ugly, pretty, short, tall, black, white....no matter if it's a love relationship, a friendship or politics..everyone bleeds the same, we all cry and laugh, we all have emotions. Nice write |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:34:31 PM AEST
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Very nicely done! This is a wonderfully expressed, obviously insightful write!
Thanks for sharing this!
SNM |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Glo on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:29:41 PM AEST
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I love this post. You've expressed yourself very well here. So much we can learn from one another, if we only took time. Looking past the outer into the inner soul. Very good write.
Glo! |
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Re: Differences Between Us
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:17:14 AM AEST
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This si a wonderful write babe.
love ya, Thunderwolf |
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