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Brick
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:50:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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i fell in love with a girl
on a jet plane
but she had to leave
way up in the sky
she had to go
and 'til this day i still cry
i fell in love with a star
so beautiful she got caught in the sky
watching down
she's the only one that makes a difference
in what i think
so i don't think to much
i don't try
cause i don't care
cause i lost myself
when my eyes fell to the skies
when that jet plane flew...
By: Dillon Rhei
Copyright ©
rhei76
... [
2004-07-06 09:50:18]
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Re: Brick
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:32:00 AM AEST
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| Good poem keep up the good work. |
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Re: Brick
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by hannahbanana on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:43:26 AM AEST
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| NICE WORK. I LIKE THIS ONE LOADS AND LOADS. |
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Re: Brick
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by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:29:54 PM AEST
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| wow, thats really nice... i like it. |
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Re: Brick
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by rao0oar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 06:14:13 PM AEST
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| sounds like she was important too...one day you will feel again but until that day and after that day keep writing for u are talented |
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