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Untitled
Contributed by
Monkeybones99
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:06:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Memories of you flood my head
There's so many it's hard to get out of bed.
The one of us on vacation in St. Barts
The one were you left and broke my heart.
Why do I still feel like I need you
After all the crap you put me through.
I gave you all of me in this relationship
You used my heart like part of a paper doll you could just clip.
You cut it out then threw it down
Played me like I was some kind of a clown.
Now it's my turn for revenge
Now I will be both the jury and the judge.
You stole all I ever was and had
Took all the good and left the bad.
I stence you to a life of hell
I hope you drown in a deep well.
I could care less if you bleed
I could cut out your heart and be pleased indeed.
At the pain and suffering I am putting you through
Watching you sqirum and her you beg me to save you.
Now you can feel the pain I feel
As I pull back your flesh like an orange peel.
See what you have turned me into
When all I ever wanted was to be loved by you.
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Monkeybones99
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2004-07-06 11:06:31]
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Re: Untitled
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:17:40 AM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Untitled
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by rao0oar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 06:32:42 PM AEST
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| i love the feeling you put into this i feel the emotions you r feeling the anger the hate and all at the same time the longing for love that was once had keep it up bro u r real good |
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Re: Untitled
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by KiLin on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:09:25 AM AEST
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| Good Job, very good job! |
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