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I love these devils
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:04:16 PM in AEST
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Sometimes the life i know
just runs away and leaves me to bleed
all these lonely tears
i fought to hide with cuts on my skin.
The night is closer than you think
it haunts my eyes and burns my soul.
Like holding devils in my hand
i writher in pain hoping for you.
I try to see if maybe i'm wrong,
waiting for death as patiently
as leaves on the new trees.
I'm broken inside,
i cry to hold the life i once knew
whats happened to me?
i concealed myself in my own cage.
Lost in despair i turn to any stranger,
i crave a hug maybe for once.
i have to look at the devils in my hand
to help lock me in deeper and tighter,
leaving my wasting eyes to look through pain,
to what you created to bring a smile.
I turned away,
i couldnt bare to be me anymore,
i love these devils in my hands
a little more everyday
cause baby its all i ever knew in my life i lost.
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2004-07-06 13:04:16]
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Re: I love these devils
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:08:01 PM AEST
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Awwwww *hugs you again, even tighter than before*
I am so sorry that you are going through it at the moment, but I know that you will survive your sadness and co9me out the other end stronger and happier than before hun.....
great write btw
takecare
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Re: I love these devils
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:09:39 PM AEST
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Wow.
This one packed a punch.
Very powerful and emotional write.
I like how you did this and I can relate.
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Re: I love these devils
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:06:05 PM AEST
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this is really sad. expressing so much pain and hurt. a very emotion vent to say the least.
powerful, nicely written. i truly hope things get better for you.
great write.
Arden |
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Re: I love these devils
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:17:14 PM AEST
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*hugs you* awww hun,
i hope you are ok.
im here if you need me.
*hugs you again*
great write. Phil |
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