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My Life is Blue
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:28:55 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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My life is blue
Depressing and sad
It's likeness to the night
Many secrets untold
Is scary
I show my feelings not
Troubling others with my thoughts
It wouldn't help me in the least
Apathy is my way out
Apathy is white
Nothing there
Nor a reason to care
Everything is blank
Just like a white screen
Nothing to look at or see
Inside my angere builds
All I see is red
Blood pounding through my veins
Red is anger
Just like a steaming, red hot kettle
Now do you see why my life is blue?
Why it's as blue as the ocean?
Or is my cover still to white?
Just like apathy
Or maybe my life is black
Depressing like the shadows
I guess we'll never know
I hide behind my white wall of apathy
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2004-07-06 13:28:55]
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Re: My Life is Blue
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:34:23 PM AEST
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| Interesting. Good write. |
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Re: My Life is Blue
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:37:26 PM AEST
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surely your life is pink then? sorry, my stupid comments aside, this is a cool poem, i dunno how, but its got a clear message and image and all that stuff..which is good. i liked it =) ive always imagined my life as a dark grey colour...
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Re: My Life is Blue
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:37:42 PM AEST
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awwww Kie-Kie, I am sorry you feel like this......*hugs you*
I am always here for you...... great write
pixie xx |
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Re: My Life is Blue
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:05:20 PM AEST
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The analogy to color is good. Nice flow.
Gentledove |
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Re: My Life is Blue
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:06:05 PM AEST
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| ah I know how those writing prompts were... Good ol' AP ENGLISH! They do train you well though... |
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Re: My Life is Blue
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:45:33 PM AEST
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Really enjoyed the read Kie
Great poem
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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