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StrangersCizinci
Contributed by
Aika
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:00:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why strangers come in my land
Stun me with their sweet talks
I capitulate and dont say NO
with piece of my land,let them go
Why strangers leave out of the blue
My soil may satisfied their thirst
Maybe my soil poisoned them?
And they feel fine not to show up again
Why strangers appear in one stroke
And want to steal the soil
And with my lame wings I soar
But they dont see my fall
Why dont I face them with pride
And dont force them out,
I become a king after battle,
In battle, I throw away my sword.
Oh no, my sword, please cut my land
I wont let them steal it any more
And then, cut me, please do that.
For I better die with honour
I wont let the strangers and enemies
Destroy and tear apart my land,
Ill better cover it with my own blood
Please, my sword, do it and cut straight!
Proč přijdou cizinci do m země,
Sladkmi řečmi mě omm,
J poddm se a neřeknu ne
A s kusem sv půdy nechm je odejt
Proč odchz cizinci znenadn,
Snad m půda zahnala jejich hlad,
Mon půda m je otrv?
A nen jim hloup se vc neozvat
Proč nhle cizinci zjev se
A půdu ukrst chtěj
A j křdly chrommi vzltnu zase
To, e padnu, vidět nechtěj
Proč j nepostavm se hrdě
A neenu je hned,
Jsem krlem vdy a po bitvě
V bitvě, zahodm svůj meč.
Oh ne, můj meči, rozsekej mou zem,
Nenechm je loupit nikdy vc,
A potom, prosm, mě rozsekej.
Se ct lep zmeřt.
Nenechm cizince a vetřelce
Zničit a na kusy rozervat mou zem,
Raději ji pokryju svou vlastn krv,
Tak prosm, meči, u tni a hned!
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-07-06 15:00:30]
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Re: StrangersCizinci
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by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:03:19 PM AEST
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| An interesting piece indeed. The poem draws me in and makes me wonder about the narrator. |
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Re: StrangersCizinci
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:30:09 PM AEST
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strong write indeed
Shari |
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Re: StrangersCizinci
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:53:33 PM AEST
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Oh my yes how sad.......do they really do this to you Aika......or is this just a very well written poem?
This is good and I understand, which is unusal for me but I still love your bright, enthusiastic, lovely and beautiful writes best!
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Re: StrangersCizinci
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:44:03 AM AEST
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Very deep and moving work yet again.So many layers to you Aika, but that is your beauty.Strangers may come, but never steal the real you
steve |
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