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heavenly hell
Contributed by
kammie
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:01:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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arguements make me cry
i cry when i argue
with my family or friends
i cry when they go on in my head
cross words
the feeling of sadness
being lonely
being isolated
distant voices almost whisper to me
to do things
to argue
to be isolated
it can be a solitary heaven
peaceful
tranquil
or a lonely hell
burning fires
flames bright
i can almost see my pathetic self crying
because of the past
it doesnt fit with my new life
then i feel you slowly caress my tears away
i open my eyes
as i am folded into your open arms
and for them few moments
i am apart from
my heavenly hell
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-06 15:01:25]
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Re: heavenly hell
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by kammie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:16:08 PM AEST
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hi its me kammie
i dont know wether to post a poem its called martin and its about martin but i dont really know wether i want him to see it if he doesnt feel the same way!! im kinda stuck coz i asked me mate to show him it if i post it but now i dont know what to do
bye and thanks for reading !! |
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Re: heavenly hell
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by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:33:47 PM AEST
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Interesting poem. I love the ending. It's great to have someone being there for you.
~Tuesday~ |
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Re: heavenly hell
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:48:52 PM AEST
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| Awww is all I can to this poem. I was very well written and being in a persons arms is always the best place to be when you want to get away. Love::::Kirby |
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