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hey now
Contributed by
frohemiasweetie
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hey now, How long has it been Since I was kicking my brothers ankle Under the table at dinner? Sitting in almost miniature wooden chairs Little tykes was but a blueprint Asking for adult intervention cuz he keep LOOKING AT ME Thrown a cup of water on the hopscotch board I just composed Way before we supposed skillet was a street invention I lived as a prisoner of mamas private menu And I ate what she made cuz it was always good food And we had two baths at the passings of Mister Sweltering Sun U betcha, it was Powder on the neck Vaseline on the elbows and knees Pink oil moisturizer in my hair I had no idea that it was privilege not to hafta eat at McDonalds I was just jealous of everyone elses happy meal toys And I was employed full time to just Pass it idly And I went into Grandmas Cedonia backyard every Sunday Digging for china Searching for mantises meditating And hunting succulent honeysuckles Nowhere to hide from to the sun But did we want to? I never knew then that life would Run over and not even wait up for me And stab me in the back Knocking me down into the trashcan Then Hey now, How long has it been Since I played I declare war all the way to the end?
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Re: hey now
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:15:42 PM AEST (User
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I got nice visuals from that childhood scenery. I wish I could get back all the time I spent on some things too... |
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Re: hey now
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:20:24 PM AEST (User
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Great poem! Really brought me back to my childhood....or my earlier childhood I guess you could say. Good memories...
Anyway, great write!
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Re: hey now
(User Rating: 1 ) by kassi124 on
Saturday, 30th October 2010 @ 03:21:44 PM AEST (User
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nicely done |
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