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Mindful Warning
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:33:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A shred of light, as it tears me apart,
A feeling of courage with all that is myself,
To be given the strength to go on each day,
Relies strictly on my focus and effort
An indication of reliance, what is the point?
Reliance is strictly trust, and trusting oneself can break apart.
An imaginative highlight of the mind, a deathly pull on the soul.
To encompass a true vision is somewhat impossible
To subconciously change a thought to what you want it to be,
Is severity in it's worst form, and is meaningless devotion.
A wish of paradise, searching for the likes,
Affection is nothing but a pointless emotion
Depriving me of a thought I wish to share,
On a level of intellect, I can search and find it
To criticise my style, and way of wisdom,
Is nothing but pure atrocity.
To animate the lives of everyone,
To switch points and turn it against oneself,
Is what makes this world, what it is,
Disappointing misery, a changing toll of life
Mistaking a lie for truth, and mistaking the truth for the reality,
Guilds us and bounds us to this place we call home,
Surely it does seem the way that can be bad,
Who is one to tell the difference?
Everything is overrated, everything is a lie
Lying in bed at night, thinking of what will happen next
The hill is growing steeper,
We don't give a damn.
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Sinful_Misery
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2004-07-06 19:33:02]
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Re: Mindful Warning
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:04:48 PM AEST
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| very true. =] |
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Re: Mindful Warning
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:29:20 AM AEST
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| yes ,makes you wonder : doesn't it.. good write |
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