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THE TIDE COMES IN AT NOON
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:22:04 PM in AEST
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The tide comes in at noon
And the sand, it will displace
On the horizon does it loom.
Stars and Moon does illumine
Oceans and clouds give chase
The tide comes in at noon.
Flowers will begin to bloom
When spring shows its face
On the horizon does it loom.
Life dancing in the womb
Does Mother Earth embrace
The tide comes in at noon.
Soon death will all but consume
And leave nothing from its grace
On the horizon does it loom.
Ode to life, written on its tomb
Buried at its new birth place
The tide comes in at noon
On the horizon does it loom.
Robert Kilpatrick
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robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-06 20:22:04]
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Re: THE TIDE COMES IN AT NOON
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:24:31 PM AEST
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| i liked it., great job! =) |
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Re: THE TIDE COMES IN AT NOON
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:28:48 PM AEST
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A very nice write. I love the picture you painted in my head.
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Re: THE TIDE COMES IN AT NOON
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:48:32 PM AEST
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This poem took me a few reads to get it all absorbed. I liked it and the message it sent me. Life changes constantly but Mother Earth is absolute. She is always there for us with all her endless wonders. Thanks for the thoughts and images you left me with.
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