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Once upon a time...
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:24:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Once upon a time,
there was no doubt in my mind,
that you loved me.
But once upon a time, got lost,
in a kingdom far far away.
And I could not bring your happily ever after...
so you found someone that could.
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Re: Once upon a time...
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:27:31 PM AEST
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| hey i really liked this, its so sad but so cute and ..i dont know..i like what you did here, awesome job. |
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Re: Once upon a time...
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by fastpitchqt on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:30:36 PM AEST
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| short but sweet. I can so relate to it. I loved him, and he loved me but he never said it. Then we broke up over a huge misunderstanding. He prolly has moved on, but not me! And he is far far away too! Very good write, keep it up! Check out my writing sometime! |
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Re: Once upon a time...
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:40:24 AM AEST
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| Great poem Thee! If only I didn't know exactly who you meant =( I still think he could have done that better and with less hurt. |
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