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One Silent Scream
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:45:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She holds the silver, sharp knife,
to her withered arms.
Veins protruding,
the rivers of life flowing.
Beneath pale skin,
holds the lies.
The secret.
The self-disgust.
Re-opening the wounds,
careful to carve,
only where they won't be noticed.
Slowly.
Gaining speed with each phase of anger.
Depression.
Insanity.
Too many times,
has this been a tool been used,
to release the pressure,
of adolesent pain.
One last streak of blood,
to calm the nerves.
Too deep.
Too late.
With her last gaping breathes,
as she drops the silver, sharp knife,
She releases one silent scream.
Which everyone hears.
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2ndChance
... [
2004-07-06 20:45:20]
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Re: One Silent Scream
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:50:18 PM AEST
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wow i Really liked the imagery of this poem, i especially like the lines "With her last gaping breathes,
as she drops the silver, sharp knife,
She releases one silent scream.
Which everyone hears."
awesome job.
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Re: One Silent Scream
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:51:17 PM AEST
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| very vivid and emotional. |
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Re: One Silent Scream
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by WereCat on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:20:22 PM AEST
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WOW!!! Love that poem. Deep & dark with a chill. I especially love that last line - She releases one silent scream. Which everyone hears. - That was so WOW!!!
-Cat
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