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Memories
Contributed by
Ceres
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:13:19 PM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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One day,
I was sittin' by my window
watchin the rain fall down
and thinkin' about the old days.
Little feet
and Grandma's big hat.
Daddy's strong arms
and Mama's strong heart.
My feet aren't so little anymore
and Grandma's hat lies in the corner all alone.
Daddy's arms aren't there anymore
but Mama's heart she gave to me to keep.
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Ceres
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2004-07-06 21:13:19]
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Re: Memories
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:20:28 PM AEST
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A very nice write. I love that your mom gave you her heart to keep.
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Re: Memories
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:07:09 PM AEST
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What a lovely way to introduce yourself to us! This is a well constructed and touching piece! I enjoyed it very much.
Welcome to YPDC! I look forward to reading more of you work!
- SNM
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Re: Memories
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by Dom on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:54:57 AM AEST
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In a sense this was lovely, lovely because of the obviously happy memories it contains. But I also found this sad because so much has changed from those memories. Its like going to the home of your childhood and standing outside and looking at how it has been changed and there was nothing you could do about it.
Great write,
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